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Jenn S. Bookworm

Single mother to an exceptional child who shares a love of reading. There's always a book nearby. I love reading and reviewing and sharing new finds with others.
Evan Burl and the Falling - Justin Blaney The concept felt fresh and the plot, while slow at the start, picked up about half way through and finished rather quickly but left the reader hanging. I found it difficult to get a unique feel for each of the characters as the writing style and way of speaking never changed between them. While I did enjoy the idea, I was not fond of the over usage of commas and other grammatical errors.

With a few good edits to fix the flow, mistakes, misspellings (and other issues) this has the potential to be a really good read.