Jenn S. Bookworm

Never before have I been unable to read through a book. There have been a few that were a struggle to read, but nothing compares to this. While there may be a very good story in here I just can not get past the near constant run on sentences and the over usage of description. If I were the editor for this manuscript I would have sent it back with a huge NO followed by an explanation of why and perhaps a book on English grammar.



I received this book through a goodreads giveaway. My thanks to the author for providing a free copy in exchange for an honest review.