The plot has tremendous potential for an exciting read and thrilling ride but instead of a page-turner we get a story told without any enthusiasm. I found it nearly impossible to feel a connection with any of the characters. There were enough grammatical errors to further detract from the potential enjoyment of reading this one. I had a hard time keeping enough interest in the story to finish it. I was more than ready to pick up a different book by the time I managed to get through this one. Parts of it sounded like the retelling of a dream with the other parts added on to explain sights or thoughts to make it long enough to publish.